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media type="custom" key="5987351" By stevendepolo The story!!!!

“This is not fair!” moaned Emma “You take Jacobs side when he stole my parker pen!”

The car was hot, stuffy and Emma started to feel sick. The dilapidated car trudged along the high street, an ant to the other sleek Mercedes Benz.

“Emma, love I never said I was taking sides"

=We are doing Joseph Crogan (if thats ok,freewilly).= This page used for planning and discussion; the drafting page for Mangas and Freewilly is here.

Hi am freewilly i like baskeball and playing video games.I have three brothers thay are 12,14 5 and i am 11 years old i live in Canada.

do you have any brothers?
 * are you a only child?
 * do you like hockey?

Agreed Plan
(Mangas: add a little more details to this plan, i.e. why does Puk steal the diamond?)

Characters: Joseph Crogan, Diamond miner, Puk head diamond miner

Location: South africa and london

Beginning: Joseph Crogan finds a very large diamond and wants to go out of the mines and make his fortune unfortunately puk steals it as he wants it for himself and disappears.

Middle: Joseph finds out that puk has gone to london and has to steal a plane as he has no money to get on a flight

End: joseph finds him and kills him then steals the diamond and goes.

About Mangas
Hi I am Mangas. That is obviously not my name. I have one sister I love Hockey. I live in England.

I have no brothers although I really want one. I cant play video games because my mum doesnt buy me the games console. What is your fave lesson.

Why are you called freewilly cause of the film .What video games do you like.

I like Call of duty

I play it at my friends house.

what is your fave food.

Mine is hamburgers and chips with coke or strawberry milkshake.

Wassup

reply soon

mangas

Mangas' Brainstorms
Characters: Joseph Crogan a diamond miner, Puk the bulky diamond miner and the police.

Location: South Africa

Beginning: Joseph Crogan finds the most beautiful diamond and wants to keep it to buy food and drinks, but the bulkiest miner sees it and steals it.

Middle: Joseph tries to get it back and follows him everywhere to get it.

End: He is caught trying to steal it and hung.

This is my first plan I missed a few days of school so I do not have another one. I will write one when I have thought of it.

Mangas

Random Question
Are you a boy or a girl?

Why aren't you answering????

Let's just do Joseph Crogan!!! He is really easy!!!

Bye for now

Mangas

FreeWilly may 10

i am a boy

are you a boy ?

Frame Story
"This isn't fair!" moaned Eric, "You take Brett's sid

when he stole my pen!"

The car was hot and stuffy and Eric was bothered.

"Eric I never said I was taking sides,"

' As if' thought Eric, rolling his eyes.

"I simply said you could of handled it a bit more, maturly" explained Eric's dad, patting Eric's mop of black hair and comparing
 * 1) it to his blonde boring hair.

=__My Story Idea:__=

__William Crogan__

Characters: Joseph, Jacob, Emma

location: Frane

1: Emma got in trubbel for her dad frem steeling

2: Her dad told her a story about

William Crogan it stared in the let 18 hundreds

3: The story ends when they get home

I am confused
What does William Crogan do? We have to think of the real story not the frame!!!! Its good though!!!!! who do you wanna do Joseph or William?

i won't to do Joseph

My plan
I did it on joseph

Characters: Joseph Crogan, Diamond miner, Puk head diamond miner

Location: South africa and london

Beginning: Joseph Crogan finds a very large diamond and wants to go out of the mines and make his fortune unfortunately puk steals it and disappears.

Middle: Joseph finds out that puk has gone to london and has to steal a plane as he has no money to get on a flight

end: joseph finds him and kills him then steals the diamond and goes.

you like it

Mangas

Its vary good

Questions
Do you like The Vampire Diaries? i do not like it WHY!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!

If you do who is your fave character?

Mine is Damon!

QUESTION

are you into football?

do you have to bring a lunch?

how long do you have for lunch?

do you have any more question for me?

thats a good start we will do Josph

Yes sooooooooooooooo

Yeh kinda annoying

one hour

hi iam here agan

we shud star on the story first

helloooooooooooooooooooo