Schweizer+drafting

Dad's face turned a shade of red.

"Eric!" Dad hollered putting a hand to his mouth "Why on earth did you tie up Mrs Munger's dog?"

Mrs Munger's face changed from a ripe red explosion to a pale white.

"Oh, my poor little cuddles ,it's okay mummy's here, it's okay!" Mrs Munger said to her poor, pampered pooch.

"I'm extremely sorry. I promise this will never happen again!" Dad shot a glare at Eric " Will it!"

"N-n-no s-ss-sorry," Eric mumbled under his breath.

As Dad and Eric left for the car, Mrs Munger made 'kissy' faces to 'her Cuddles'.

"Dangflabit Eric! I've told you. Why do you put me through this! It's the third time this week! I feel like putting a tracking device on you! Gosh. You really remind me of..."

=**David Crogan!**= "But dad!" Eric cried. "NO BUTS ERIC!!" His dad hollared. "It wasn't anything big! Just a little key chain!" He was band from the store for 10 days. " I don't care! You still stole It! You have know right to say that!" Eric's dad said while getting into the car. Eric was upset that his dad was yelling at him for a little key chain. "I thought I could trust you Eric, and then you go behind me back and steal?! What would make you such a thing?!" Eric's dad said. "I didn't have enough money, and you wouldn't give me any, did I have any other choice?" Eric said with a smile on his face. "Excuse me? Eric, I know that sometimes I'm not the perfect father but would you rather have 'David Crogan' as your dad?" Eric's dad said, his hand was on Eric's knee. "Who's David Crogan?" Eric asked. "You haven't heard of David Crogan? He's your great ansester!" Eric's dad screamed! "Can I hear the story? Your going to take the long way home anyways!" Eric Cried. "Alright, but after the story, you have to promise not to steal again!!" "Okay" Eric said... and the story Began!!

"You will never take me alive!!" David said while he heard Galloping and ran! David took a shortcut, through some mud. It had just rained so it was hard to run. "GET BACK HERE!!" Yelled the police while there horses stopped to smell something. It was David's gun's that the horses were sniffing. "OH SHOOT!! 3 of my guns are missing!!" ....... David was already miles away from there, but his client needed 5 guns, and he only had 2. He started running his fastest and about 30 minutes. after he was there. "OUCH!" David screamed. He had slipped and fell! He yelled so loud, he startled the horses, and the police found out where he was. "Put your hands where we can see them!" Said the police. David still tried to run,crawl, and even kick. The police went behind him and picked him up. David tried to get away, but the policemen were to strong.

He was sentenced to 25 years in jail for smuggling illegal products.

"I don't want to go to jail!!!" Eric cried. "You won't have to, only if you don't steal again. Eric, it is very dangerous to steal!" "Okay! I won't steal again! I promise!!" After they talked about David, Eric told his brother Cori. "David Crogan was a smuggler....."

I finished my story.... If you want to edit or put more detail in it, you can! Bye!! -May 11th..... You can make some suggestions, thankx!!

My verson

"But dad!" Eric cried. "NO BUTS, ERIC!" his dad hollered.

"It wasn't anything big! Just a little bit of cash!” He was banned from the store for 2 weeks.

“I don’t care you still stole from me and you know that’s not right.

"I didn't have enough money, and you wouldn't give me any, did I have any other choice?"

Eric said with a smile on his face.

"Excuse me? Eric, I know that sometimes

I'm not the perfect father but would you rather have 'David Crogan' as your dad?" Eric's dad said, his hand on Eric's knee.

"Who's David Crogan?" Eric asked.

"You haven't heard of David Crogan? He's your great ansester!" Eric's dad explained.

"Can I hear the story? You’re going to take the long way home, anyway!"

"Alright, but after the story, you have to promise not to steal again!"

"Okay" Eric said... and the story began!



"You will never take me alive!" David said. He heard galloping - and ran! David took a shortcut, through some mud. It had just rained so it was hard to run.

"GET BACK HERE!" yelled the police while there horses stopped to smell something. It was David's gun's that the horses were sniffing.

"OH SHOOT!! 3 of my guns are missing!!"

David was already miles away from there, but his client needed 5 guns, and he only had 2. He started running his fastest and about 30 minutes. after he was there. "OUCH!" David screamed. He had slipped and fell! He yelled so loud, he startled the horses, and the police found out where he was.

"Put your hands where we can see them!" said the police. David still tried to run, crawl and even kick. The police went behind him and picked him up. David tried to get away, but the policemen were to strong.

He was sentenced to 25 years in jail for smuggling illegal products.

"I don't want to go to jail!" Eric cried. "You won't have to, only if you don't steal again. Eric, it is very dangerous to steal!" "Okay! I won't steal again! I promise!!"

After they talked about David, Eric told his brother Cori.

"David Crogan was a smuggler....."