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​Haley and Wolf 's page

=** We are writing about K.Alexander Crogan, the secret agent. **=

This page used for planning and discussion; the drafting page for Haley and Wolf is here.

My teacher said to do a plan...

One of my plans...

Main plan: Characters= K.Alexander Crogan and a robber Location= Downtown London

Beginning: K.Alexander Crogan sent on a mission to retrieve a briefcase, filled with $500,000.

Middle: K.Alexander finds that the robber had killed someone.

End: K.Alexander Crogan fights with robber, K.Alexander kills robber with gun shot

Subplot: Characters= K.Alexander Crogan and a robber Location= Downtown London

Beginning: K.Alexander's car break down when he journeys to London, he takes to a garage.

Middle: K.Alexander Crogan goes back to garage, after fight with robber, K.Alexander Crogan finds the briefcase in his car, some pople try to accuse him.

End: K.Alexander is safe, when the briefcase is opened and nothing but a dollar and a letter(from the robber explaining that all the money is gone, floating in the river thames) is left in the case.

My second plan...

Main Plot: Characters= K.Alexander Crogan and a woman robber(who recently robbed a bank) Location= Rome

Beginning: K.Alexander Crogan is ordered to find and kill woman robber.

Middle: Before killing, Crogan falls in love with woman robber.

End: Fakes killing woman and they live happily ever after...

Subplot: Characters= K.Alexander Crogan and a woman robber(who recently robbed a bank) Location= Rome

Beginning: The woman robber is really allready in love withan other man-her partner in crime.(man robber)

Middle: Partner in crime saw the fake death, thought it really happened.

End: Partne in crime kills himself, woman robber does not know this and starts new spy life with K.Alexander Crogan.

**Hello**
Do you have a brother or sister ? Are you fully American, or not ??????
 * I'm Wolf, not my real name.**
 * I'm 11 years old and I live in London, Ealing and I have a 16 year old sister. I love to play sports - especially Netball and I play for three teams. My favourite films are the twilight series and 17 again. My favourite thing about the school is... the people at the school..!**
 * Do you like the twilight movies or books and do you like Taylor Lautner ?(if not, I won't mention it again)

Peace out ! :) Wolf.x **

**Hey Wolf, its Haley..... so glad to here from you. Yes, I have a younger brother named Ryan who is 8 and I love to play sports especially tennis! Yes i am fully american and I live in Palm Springs California. Have you ever been to California? I have read Twilight and yes i like Taylor Lautner but i don't love him :} My birthday is February 23rd... When's your birthday? I have a idea at the bottom of the page for Crogan's Adventures... Loved your ideas!! Hope to hear from you soon! From your new friend, Haley :}**

Hello, I also love to play tennis(yet i am not amazing at it). I haven't been to California,but i would like to go! My birthdays on October 14th. Work related questions...What Crogan character do you want to use? What plan do you want to do? Non-work related questions... How old are you? Do you have a pet? Wolf.x The first greeting thing I did was very colourful and took me a long time-so by the way I do have a life, and its just that I had nothing else(fun)to do at the time(I was at school)!!!

**Hey Wolf, Great to here from you.... I am 12 years old and i have a dog named Sadie. :) I think for the crogan thing we should do K. Alexander Crogan because we both chose that ad then we could just combine our stories together and see where it goes. It's just a thought. I don't really care what crogan story we do... whatever one you like the best. Now i have a couple questions for you. How is it like at a all girls school? Do you like the show Glee, because i love that show. If not we don't have to talk about it. ;) Do you have any pets?**

//__** From, Haley

I totally understand about the colorful writing thing.... i had the same problem :) **__//

Hey Haley, I'd love to do K.Alexander Crogan. My teacher said that you were supposed to write the story first, and than I redraft, than you redraft it, than I record it.....so you can make up what happens in the story.

Answers: Its not that fun at an all girls school, but its sometimes funny because when we like play rugby in P.E we all, like scream when the balls thrown at you and the teacher is always annoyed!!!

I love Glee...my fav person in glee is Kurt...yours?

I don't have any pets, but I love dogs!!!What type of dog do you have???

Talk to you soon Wolfx :)

Hey Wolf, I was thinking the ideas we have for the crogan thing, that we could combine our ideas and then we both will make up the ending. :) I love Glee! My favorite character in it is Sue Sylvester, the cheerleading coach! I'm not quite sure what kind of dog mine is though>....... Talk to you later, :) Haley

Hello... I have to go and research K.Alexander. Random Question...Are you on facebook??? Bye:) Wolfx

Hey.. For the crogan thing do you write the story and do I edit it or what?? I'm kinda confused...:) I'm not on Facebook but my mom is and she has pictures of me and my family on Facebook. What's your real name so I acn look you up.. on facebook of course. :) How will we start the crogan story with the children and the father? Talk to you soon, Haley

Hi... I'm not so sure who does what, but I'm supposed to be sending you the frame story- the beggining with son and father(I think). My teacher said that no-one in are class is aloud to tell our partner our my name because of some reason...Whats your mom's name so I can see what you look like, but can you ask your mum if you are on her profile picture, otherwise I can't see you:(. You will see what I look like in a few weeks or somthing...So for now... I have brown hair(just below the shoulders, brown eyes, I 'm tall, feet size 7(don't worry, I'm not a giant:}),I wouldnt say I'm skinny, I'm average..., And I am .... part New-Zealand and Japanese(some people say I look asian, some say I don't. Anyway...talk to you soon Wolfx :) P.S.What do you look like?

** Hey wolf, Ok, my mom's name is Barbara Diefenbach and on my mom's profile page is a picture of me and my brother Ryan. So you make up the frame story, maybe?? Hope to hear from you soon! :) Haley :) **

Hey Haley:) Are you in the picture of you and brother with the easter eggs? Anyway, I will be sending you the frame story very soon... Talk to you soon... wolfx :)

** Hey Wolf, I loved the frame story! Now here comes the hard part, making it all come together.... Yes on Facebook that is me and my brother during easter. Glad you found out what i look like!!! Hope to hear from you soon!! Haley :) **

Hey Wolf, I have some ideas for the story at the bottom of the page.... if you don't like it just tell me. I wont take it personally. I mean i want us to make a great crogan story together!! But i hope you like it ;) Haley

Hey Haley.. I loved your idea(but it sounded a bit too muchlike the private eye... Mabye you could write it so its less detective like). You may go ahead and do your idea. When your teacher tells you to. Hope to talk to you soon Wolfx **:**P

Hey Wolf, Thanks for the feedback!! I know this is a stupid question, but aren't we doing the private eye story?? I'm very confused!! If we aren't then that was my mistake and i apologize... :) Hope to hear from you soon!! Haley :)

Hey wolf, My mistake.... I just found out we are doing the secret agent.. I got them both confused and im sorry about that!! I dont really know much about secret agents though, but i will try!! Maybe you could give me like a plot or a starting idea and i will branch out my thoughts after that.... Just a thought :) Haley :)

Hi Haley, Um...you can use our old ideas and combine them while changing it a bit so its sceret agenty kind of thing... Sorry its quick I will give an other idea soon Wolfx :)

Hey Wolf, Great to hear from you!! I think that would be a great idea to combine both of our ideas together.. I will change my idea a little bit when i think of something really good, unless you like the idea? I will also try very hard to think of ideas that would work for the story. Haley :)

Hi, You may can do whatever you want, I don't mind. I hope you enjoyed reading my description and if you want, you can tell me if there are some things I should change or add to it. From me, wolf, in London, Ealing, my house, writing this, listening to Justin Bieber, love me, [], now?, feeling stupid, so I think I will stop, so, bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey Wolf, I loved your description!!! If i could make any changes, I wouldn't... :) Trust me, i would tell you if changes should be made. I am trying to think of more ideas to make the story better. Sorry its short!! Haley

Hi Haley, I wrote out two plans because I was told to, so you can use one of them if you want to. You don't have to though...and you can change some parts if needed. I have to go because I have school tomorrow and so I need to do my maths homework! : { wolfx :)

Hey wolf, My ideas and conversation are on the other page, the editing page.

Hey wolf, Did you delete the conversation chart on the other page?? I was just wondering because i went on that page and our conversations weren't there. Hope to hear from you soon!! Haley

P.S. What is that picture up above of, its cool whatever it is :)

Hi, Sorry, my teacher told me to make sure that there is no conversations on that page:( The picture is supposed to be a spy thing...my teacher(again!) told me to up that picture.. Hear from you soon!!!!!!!! wolfx :)

Hey Wolf, Its ok i totally understand... When do you want to start the story? I guess on the next page we can start the story.. Sorry its short :) GTG Haley

Hi, Sure we can do the story on the next page, you cca just carry on from my frame story. Type you(you know how its "see you", I'll "type you" because I'll type to you soon???)ummm Wolfx :P

Hey wolf, I have been adding on to the story on the next page. I added some things, hope you like them!! Hope to hear from you soon! :> Haley

Hey Haley, I love your your story so far. Question(again): Are you friends with anyone else doing this project? Why I asked: No clue??? J Wolfxx {

Hey wolf, Yes most of the people on Crogan's Adventures are most some of my friends. Who are your friends on Crogan? I'm so glad you liked my story!! I will be off and on the computer to edit the story. If you have any ideas, please add on. We need all the ideas we can get. :) Hope to hear from you soon!! Haley ..........

Hi, My friends on Crogan's adentures is everyone as thery are all in my class!! But my good friends are Chippy (who is partnered with Maggie), Cinnamon (partnered with Courtney Ng), and Demonica who is partnered with someone in the Canada school! Bye wolfx:)

** Wolf's brainstorm **
Here are my ideas for the Crogan story. ( Sorry, they're rubbish,: P )

The American and The British fight in the war of __INDEPENDENCE__. The Crogans get carried away, fighting with each other, and are the only ones left fighting. They are left stranded on a plank of wood, with only each other for company. **DUN DUN DUUUUUUNNN!!!!!** They fight, shark comes, Charles is used as bait, William reaches land, Charles is waiting at land... somehow?Charles looks angry, William confused!!!
 * 1) **//Who = William and Charles Crogan - Title = Lost at sea - Where = Middle of nowhere//**...

2. **// Who = Calloway Crogan and M.Rouge - Title = The Chase - Where = Central London... //** Calloway Crogan is looking for M.Rouge ( Madame Rouge - a criminal !! ). As M.Rouge runs off, Calloway Crogan catches sight of a red jewel in her pocket ( The stolen jewelery ). Calloway chases M.Rouge and corners her. He lifts a gun to her head, while taking the jewel from M.Rouge. M.Rouge's lasts words,'why do you need it' and Calloway replies,'for myself'.Ends with a gun firing.

3. **//Who = K.Alexandra Crogan - Title = The Killer Briefcase - Where = Everywhere...//** K.Alexandra Crogan is ordered to retrieve a briefcasefrom an enemys home in (you can choose). K.A is given the location and searches for it. Finds it, gives it manager. Asks manager, 'whats in it'. Manager says, 'the gun i'm using to kill you'. Gun fires.

__Sorry, :( its brief, I have to go watch the end of Glee!!!__

= __Haley's Brainstorm:__ =

=== K. Alexander Crogan: The FBI tells him to go on a mission... The mission is what you wrote for him under your brainstorm ideas..... But for the ending maybe we should make it even a little more exciting but i don't know how we would do that considering your ending is superb :) ===

K. Alexander Crogan is sent on a mission in Downtown London, by the FBI, to retrieve a stolen briefcase filled with $500,000 worth of cash..... He even finds somebody was killed by this robber.... K Alexander and the robber fight (fight action scene). The robber is killed by a gun that K Alexander shot.

**Conversations** Hey wolf, For your ideas on the other page i think we should do the first one, I mean if you want to do that one ;) I feel we can think of better ideas for that one but whatever you want. I think this page could maybe be the editing and brainstorm page. It can also maybe be if we like want to write notes to eachother. We can add on to eachothers work and stuff like that for this page. Just a thought.... Hope to hear from you soon!!!! Haley :)

HI, Sure, we can do the first plan. I don't mind whichever either, I have to go so... bye, wolfx :)

**__Hey wolf,__**
 * __I will probably be on the computer later thinking of ideas. but i got nothing now. I just wanted to reply to your response.:)__**
 * __ Hope to hear from you soon!! !__**