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This page used for planning and discussion; the drafting page for Messy Cat and (Peace)Girl is here.
 * We are writing about __Junichi Crogan__**

These are question's I would like to know about you!

Do you have tea time?

What do you eat for supper?

Do you stay for lunch? If so, what do you bring to eat?

Final Plan for Our Crogan Story
Characters: Ninja Junichi Crogan (a guard who is scared of fighting) regiment of soldiers and a gang of arch rivals ( trying to get in to steal something important)Eric and his Dad

Location: Chinese castle courtyard.

1 Eric gets in trouble...so dad starts to tell a story.

2 Arch rivals start to appear in the distance so all solders get ready for battle.

3 The Colonel is unwell so Major Junichi has to take charge.

4 The arch rivals had arrived. Their behaviour is threatening.

5 They are about to fight when Major Junichi faints out of fright!

do you like this one?

Yes! I do like this one... this one is my favorite! Nice writing skills!!

Frame story
This story really made me want to read more!! You are a very good Story writer!! Can you please tell me what happens next?!?!?

Dad's face turned a shade of red. "Eric!" Dad hollered putting a hand to his mouth "Why on earth did you tie up Mrs Munger's dog?" Mrs Munger's face changed from a ripe red explosion to a pale white. " Oh, my poor little cuddles ,it's okay mummy's here, it's okay!" Mrs Munger said to her poor, pampered pooch. " I'm extremely sorry. I promise this will never happen again!" Dad shot a glare at Eric " Will it!" "N-n-no s-ss-sorry," Eric mumbled under his breath. As Dad and Eric left for the car, Mrs Munger made 'kissy' faces to 'her Cuddles'. "Dangflabit Eric! I've told you. Why do you put me through this! It's the third time this week! I feel like putting a tracking device on you! Gosh. You really remind me of..."

Messy cat

Hi i'm __**Messy Cat**__ **.** i live in Chiswick London,I am a huge fan of Taylor Launter I love playing then gitar, I am 10 years old and will be 11in 3weeks. I have one dog and am going to get another one arfter summer vacation. My favorite thing about school is playtime because i can hangout with my friends and do what ever i like.i do swimming and baletout of school and used to do yoga but have stopped. P.S.I'm a girl.

Peace Girl
Heeeeey!! I'm peace... I'm a fan of Tech n9ne.. you might not have heard of him before but he is a really good rapper... anwyays, I am 11, turning 12 in September. I have 2 dogs, Jackson && Rampage, and 2 cats, Maddie and Annie. I have 2 brothers, Zack and Nathan, and 2 sisters, Katherine and Andrea. I LOVE Football, basically all the sport. I'm very athletic and I'm a fast runner. I might go to camping when Summer Vacation gets here.. I like swimming to, I've never played the guitar.. but I like Playing drums on Rock band... I have a lot of friends, and love chillen at the park. I'm not really a ballet person... I did Dance when I was 5-6.

Questions
Why6 do you call your self Peace girl? My name is peace.. but my teacher put 'peace(girl)' because I'm the only grade 6 girl... and at the end of whenever I talk to someone I always see peace.

do you like justen beber? I'm not a BIG fan.. but I don't find him.

how old are you? I'm 11

Are you into soccer? I am VERY into Soccer..

Where do you live? I live in Canada, Saskatchewan,Regina,East view,Wallace Street... Milky way.. (Earth)

My Questions...

Are you into sports? I am VERY into sports!!!!!!!!!

Do you like living in England? Yes, but would like to live in others as well.

Who is your role model? My role model i9s Rebeca Adlington. (a english swimmer).

Have you ever been out of England? If so, where, and have you ever been to Canada? Ehh? Ihave been out of the uk. I have been to Denver, Colorado.

Do you have any family that lives in Canada? Sorry No. But i have a friend who lives there.

What kind of music do you listen to? All tyes.

What are your school hours? And how long do you have for lunch? 9.00a.m., 3.30p.m. We have lunch for1 hour.

What do you want to be when you grow up? loads of things but mostly a Vet.

Heeey, I noticed that you haven't been on latley! What's going on?!?!?!


 * I was doing __Brundibar__ practice! **

ohh...What is Brundibar?

Peace out!! SEE YA!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Plans

 * __No.1__**

Characters: Eric and his Dad, Benjamin Crogan,his cowboy friends, a horse trader and a horse called Ferrari. Location: Denver

1 Eric does something naughty. So dad starts to tell him a story.

2 Benjamin Crogan, is on horseback during a fight scene. Then his horse collapses right under him and dies.

3 After the fight one of Benjamin's friends walks over and tells him of a horse ranch nearby where he could get a new horse.

4 Benjamin was going to ride to the ranch but of cause he couldn't because he had no horse so his friend took him.

5 Benjamin found a great horse called //Ferrari// and amazingly it was //blue!//

Do you like it?


 * __No.2__**

Characters: Ninja Junichi Crogan (a guard who is scared of fighting) regiment of soldiers and a gang of arch rivals ( trying to get in to steal something important)Eric and his Dad Location: Chinese castle courtyard.

1 Eric gets in trouble. So dad starts to tell a story.

2 Arch rivals start to appear in the distance so all solders get ready for battle.

3 The Colonel is unwell so Major Junichi has to take charge.

4 The arch rivals had arrived. Their behaviour is threatening.

5 They are about to fight when Major Junichi faints out of fright!

do you like this one?

Yes! I do like this one... this one is my favorite! Nice writing skills!!


 * __No.3__**

Characters: Eric and his Dad. Robert Crogan, cowboy friends and a new horse. Location: Buffalo Springs

1 Eric gets in trouble. Dad tells a story.

2 Cowboy friends get a horse for their new companion Robert Crogan. They then persuaded Robert to get on the horse.

3 The horse bucked and off Robert flew

4 So to not lose face, he got back on.

5 It all ended up with Robert on a wild horse galloping off into the sunset!

My 1st story. Peace... This is my 1st draft, would you like to work with me and put more detail in it? Just tell me what to do! - May 10th, 2010.

1. Eric gets in trouble for stealing, so dad tells a story about David Crogan.

2. David hears galloping, and starts running with the smuggled guns.

3.David takes a shortcut & the galloping stops.

4.After it the galloping stop, David relizes he dropped 3 of the guns, and the police must have took them, so he goes back to see.

5. David is very sneaky so he takes he shortcut again and see's that the police are still there.

6. He startled the horses, and the police has spotted him.

7. It just rained to the mud was hard to run in.

8. He still tried but all the guns have fell, and the police have caught him.

9. He was sentenced to 25 yrs. in jail, for smuggling illegal products.

10. Dad had said that, that would happen to him if he stool again. Eric said he does'nt want to go to Jail, and he will never steel again!!

Hope you like it. Write back and tell me what you think!!

i like it but I would prefer it if we write about Junichi Crogan is that OK?

This is my rough draft, this is all I have right now, you can add to it if you like!