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Thank you. And I was trying to write another version of the story but if you cant write the second draft then i could do it.

maybe the main charicter can be forced to decide who to save his girlfriend or his sister and he knows here they both are i'll write the sedcond draaft as soon as i can...!!!!! hope you like my ideas xxx p.s love the first draft!!!!!!!!!!!

Hi Cinnamon, I started the story but Im at a dead end. I think i need some ideas because im out of ideas.

==** hey um, i think we have to use the name junichi, but the girl could have a really pretty girly name like? **

== == Ya I know. But i was talking aboutthe evil villian and the girl. I was looking at the website and I think that Ayumi and Akira are pretty names. And i dont know which one I like better. You can pick or pick another pretty name. ==

Also for the story plan how does crogan-junichi find out about the girl?????
media type="custom" key="5987317" Ok and this website has many different types of names. And they have guy's names and girl's names so it'll be easy to kind names. [] maybe we can both think of the names! This page used for planning and discussion; the drafting page for Cinnamon and Courtney is here .==

Questions
So since we finished the frame story what do we do now? Because i have a great idea for the story about the how crogan- junichi saves the girl. And what's the evil dude's name and what's the girls name?

Plan
Cinnamon's plan:

Characters:

Location:

Plan: 1. Starts with eric getting into trouble,Dad tells him off for getting into trouble 2. Story begins, crogan junichi finds out a girl got kidnaps and has to go save her 3. Gets to evel villans lair and looks for her. 4. Finds out villan has gone in a hellicopter an left her there with a bomb in the lair! 5. Falls in love with her whilst the building is about to blow up, they survive

I think thats a great story and i think that was the plan all along. But how does he find out about the girl and whats the girls name?

Hi Cinnamon, I am the English teacher with the John Glenn kids, and I apologize for intruding.......I couldn't help but see that you are into golf. That's brilliant! Our group of communities that exist in this valley are all "golfing" crazy communities. The city of Palm Desert where I live has actual golf cart lanes painted along the sides of many streets where bicycle lanes would otherwise be. I will try to get some pictures to post later. Because the Coachella Valley area is largely a resort area, there are a lot of neighborhoods that are built around golf courses. There may be 100+ courses in this relatively small area. I live in a retirement complex with 4500 homes and it is built around two full golf courses. Students going through upper years in school and college/university can major in golf course management. Since this is a desert, there are swimming pools all over for survival in the summer. It reaches triple digit temperatures here. Sounds like you would fit in perfectly over here, thus you have an invitation to come stay with me if you ever get near these parts. Judy Graham P.S. I have read all the Twilight books too.

Thanks, I like playing with my brothers in our local golf course I have been playing golf for three years and I play every summer and take lessons! bye xxx

Hello my name is Courtney Ng I do not know how to start a discussion so i just wrote it here. Please write back Courtney. :) P.S. I'm a girl. :)

About Cinnamon !
**i live in London .** ** My hobbies are golf and swimming! I love reading vampire books(especially twilight).
 * Hi my name is  Cinnamon . **

I love listening to music. My favourite thing about school is all my friends.

Do you have any pets ? Do you like your school ? What shops do you like?

I watch Glee! I am currently reading the Vampire Diaries!

P.S Im a girl too!

Hi Cinnamon, I live in Indio, California. It is 2 hours away from hollywood. And if you want to know where i live just click on "Have a Go!" on the right to find a map of Southern California. My hobbies are playing tennis and running track. I love reading the Lightning Thief, Twilight, music, and my friends. (1 of my friends is paired up with fashionhawk and my other friend is paired up with strawberry)

1)I dont have any pets. 2)I love my school and almost all my teachers. 3)And I love shopping at Forever 21.

Now i have some questions fro you.

1)Do you have any siblings?**
 * 2)How old are you?**
 * 3)And do you have a cell phone?**

More about Cinnamon!
Hi Courtney,

I have never heard of forever 21 but i think (because you live in California) you will know the shop Hollister ,its my favouirite shop!**

Do you watch Glee?

Answers! **1) Yes two older brothers (they're twins) 2) I'm ten are you? 2) I do have a cell phone!**

Hey are you team Edward or team Jacob? (I am soooooooooooo team Jacob!)

=Brainstorm ideas!=

Peter Crogan: Goes bad and tells plans to britan!​ Benjamin Crogan: Finds Love with an Indian!
 * Joseph Crogan: Meets diamond thief. **

Suggested Plans
I'm team Jacob, he's so hot!!!! :D And Hollister rocks!!!!! !! And I'm 12 cuz in California we have a different schooling system.


 * Crogan-Junichi: Fights girl ninja and falls in love!

K. Alexander Crogan: Sneaks into British territory. **


 * Jonathon Crogan: Fight of indians in open field and then idk​. **


 * And those are some ideas that I have but I think we should do either Crogan-Junichi, Benjamin Crogan, or Joseph Crogan. what do you think we should do????? **

Thank you for sharing that information with us, it was very helpful and i understand what i should be doing.

Crogan- Junichi
I like Crogan -Junich I think he's really cool! It could be a cool ninja story that would be awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!


 * More About Crogan- Junichi**

Ya it'll be so AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait until i see your rough draft about him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So are you writing about him?????????

Beginning

Someone left a letter on Cogan-Junichi's nightstand that says "I have your sister and your girlfriend. They are both trapped in two a rooms one with a bomb. One person is to the north and the other is to the south of Japan”. One has his sister Emiko, but the other location at has his beloved girlfriend he wants too propose to .He doesn't know which location has Emiko and which location has Kioko (his girlfriend). The bomb is set for 24hours. He is exactly 15 hours from each location but both locations are opposite ways from each other so he only has time to save one.

Middle He takes a chance and goes north he goes on a small helicopter he stole from his enemy six months ago but he had no idea how to fly it! He lands in a small crash-he only had 7 hours to get there and he has to find some form of transport to get him half way across Japan. He comes across a small weapons shop with a cherry red Ferrari outside. He knew how to hotwire a car so he pilled out a pin from a mop of hair pinned carefully upon tin small he uses it to hotwire the car. He drives away incredibly fast hoping the driver doesn’t find out 6 hours later he pulls up to a tall building. He gets into the dirty revolting elevator then something happens- something rattles in the elevator and it starts to fill with water. Then the water overflows to the top of the elevator and he is swimming in an elevator there is a small escape root at the top of the elevator. He swims through it with a knife in his mouth from having to loosen the bolts to escape. He swims through this old prison. There were skeletons with shackles and blood mixed with water- it was like swimming through hell! He finally found a door and when he opened it all the water flew into the room and so did he quickly shut the door and ran up a flight of stairs with only 17 minutes to go!

End

He walks into the room with a man in the corner holding the hand of the weapon more pearsing then his eyes. “I had a feeling that I’d see you” “” yea, well u just kidnapped the two most important people in the world so of course I’m going to come after you” “Yes well there is a twist to this game”