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This page used for planning and discussion; the drafting page for Nickelbackrocks and Demonica is here.




 * We are writing about William and Charles Crogan.**

Demonica's Plan
Characters: Marks-man, Marks lady, Little boy Loction: Ireland

Beginning: Marks-man is sent out on job to north Ireland, ehind himto kill the 'spy child'

Middle: Marks-man is waiting outside a shop while a blonde haired women creeps up with dagger ready to kill the marks-man

2nd middle: the very clever boy stops the women by jumpinf on his back.

End: the marks man an lady both fall in love with the clever boy Hi

Hi I'm Demonica - not my real name- I live in the dark depths of Harrow, where wasps and bees are locals and the only entertaining thing is your pet. I enjoy cooking and Many more things ( to many to type up) including Manga. Also I have seven cats, a guinea pig and six pugs (thats a pug if you haven't seen one)(all animals spread across the family).

I have a younger sister and a 11 month half sister, I live with my mum and sister ( not the 11 month).

I would like to ask some quezzi's to get to know you:

Do you have any pets? i got one little black dog

Do you have any siblings? i got two brothers that are spoield rotten and a koko sister

What kind of music do you like? HEAVY MEATAL of course What kind of hobbies do you have?wrestiling  Peace out and Rock on!!!

p.s im a BOY!!!!!!!!!!!! nickelbackrock's P.S. I am a girl



= Demonica's Brainstorm Idea's =

Hi, this is Demonica, I just wanted to share my brain storm Idea's of my three favourite characters crom the crogan family tree. ( Sorry they were thoughts that were forced not born with awesomeness :o :P )

3rd: Daniel Crogan Job: Lion Tamer and Escape Artist Ideas: His first thing he escaped from How he got his scar Why be a Lion Tamer ?

2nd: Geoffrey Crogan Job: Marksman ( Assasin) Ideas: Why be a Marksman? First Job how he finds his wife how he dies?

1st: William and Charles Crogan Job: William: Minute Man Charles: British Infantry

idea's: why where Twins sperated? Why join war?

or William and Charles crogan

Charles and William ( one from britain and one from America), have gone to war (the war of independance) when William has realised how similiar they looked since he thought he was looking at a portrait ( no mirrors back in those days ) and seemed to remember that his father told him he had a twin brother that had died.

2. William takes Charles to his Fathers house whilst sneaking out of his head generals view. Father tells story of how the twins where seperated ( Mother had had to been sent home to England to look after her dying mother, but father had had to stay to support his family, so instead of thier mother taking both William and Charles, both parents have a child each and to not ever tell this story until there twenty five), Charles is infurated by the story and says that William's father us lying and pledges to kill him on the battlefield. Charles runs off to join the war commencing out side and starts to fight American's.

3. William is angry at Charles for not beliving his father and swears to be the person to kill Charles on the battlefield (the war they are fighting), and starts to chase after Charles.

4. William and Charles fight to the death

I haven't figured out how they die yet so ...

Geoffrey Crogan story plan ( you can tell me if there rubbish ;) )

1. Geoffrey's big boss has told him to go on the mission to kill Sam freedhing ( shows a picture of a red headed man with piercing black eyes and a knife)

2. Geoffrey wallk's out of big boss's HQ ( disguised as a shut down shop) whilst hiding a big ivory handled knife.

3. Geoffrey spots Sam freedhing and grabs neck of his collar and putting big black balls of cloth, down Sam freedhings throat

4. Geoffrey grabs knife and stabs it into Sam freedhing's chest. Geoffrey hears someone scream.

5. Geoffrey finds a women in the corner watching him whilst screaming "i'll call the coppers on you!" Geoffrey stabs women in thigh and chest then dumps her onto Sam freedhing to die. Geoffrey wallks away with knife and goes back to big boss's HQ.

( I know that was rubbish I'm very sorry)

Frame story for one of the characters we choose for the story:)

" Do it! Do it!" chanted petit Casey. Her blonde and brown hair bounced up and down. Erik grunted. The yellow balloon stared Erik right in the eyes, daring him. "Chicken! Cluck,-Erik is chicken-cluck!"Justen said, hands on hips and doing the most hilarous chicken dance, his head moving back and forth whilst his feet juttered around. Erik sighed. His hair seemed to be debating against him and covering his eyes, not letting Erik see. A deep voice hummed, ' oh of course', making Justin and Casey giggle. A squeling clench freed the finally grabbed balloon. Thwip. Splash! "Erik!!!" bellowed Eriks Dad, ' I just got this suit laundered, Dad thought. Justin and Casey began to run:

Description of My favourite Crogan's House ( Charles crogan )

The smell of smoking wood cascaded around the stone room. A bubbling pot of tea rumbled on top of the orange and yellow beast below. The sound of birds tewwting and chirping secret songs up in the giant nest protecting Charles Crogan's house. The rough stone wall radiated heat from the fiery burning beast. You could see a never-ending amount of doors from the one living room door. The sweet taste of honey tea lingered on every single taste-bud on Charles Crogan tongue. An Oak stool stood lonely, the only thing carrying wieght on it's back. The hard flower pattern chair was like an 100 year old boulder.

Nickelbackrocks

My book that I want to write about is Benjamin crogan since his job is gunfighting bad people (nicklebackrocks chose). Nicklebackrocks brainstorming. I choose ben crogan because it looks cool with lots of guns,fighting and killing.

Demonica

Nickelbackrock's plan. my story i want to read is Benjemin Crogan because it looks interesting to me.One day in the wild west Ben crogan was the Cheif of a little town called resa. later in the day an assaisain named Geffory killing for money like allways then ben had an of this killing spree so he wants to put Geffory in jail as sone as posible with out any guns.i cant believe that said geffory to his severdtized human head,why would he try to put me in jail without any guns when i have a knife and a gun.