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This is Maggie's and Chippy's page media type="custom" key="5987305"
 * We are writing about Geoffrey Crogan.**


 * This page used for planning and discussion; the drafting page for Maggie and Chippy is** here.

Chippy's Plan
Characters: The Duchess of London, Geoffrey Crogan, Percy (Fat man).

Location: Central London.

Begging: Geoffrey walks out of a saloon and sits on a bench. A short, fat man (Percy) asks to talk to him privately. Percy begins speaking, but falls to the ground shortly after. He dies. Geoffrey finds a note, addressed to himself, in Percy's jacket. He reads it. The Duchess of London shot Percy. Geoffrey must poison her.

Middle: Geoffrey rides his horse to the duchess's castle, the poison in his pocket. Geoffrey sneaks around the castle, avoiding the guards. Geoffrey finds the duchess in her chambers. He sneaks in and locks the door. The duchess sees him, she calls for the guards. They can't get in because the door is locked. They begin trying to break the lock from the outside.

End: Geoffrey reaches for his poison. He pours it into her moth: she is tied up. She is slowly dying, but as she is dying Geoffrey and the duchess's eyes met. They instantly fall in love. Geoffrey realises that what he is doing is wrong, what good will it do killing somebody? Geoffrey kissed her, the only antidote, but causes him to die...

Feel free to change where you want! It's great, just he can't poison her Because a Marksman is a skilled sniper so he has to shoot her..........and your idea is great and another thing snipers are usually far when they shoot so he would have to be kind of far off and maybe come to the castle after shooting her, but other then that great idea!!!!

I will change when I get home.

About Maggie
Hey Chippy, this is Maggie i'm 12 i live in La Quinta, Californa I can't really say i'm a twilight fan (because I have never read the books) but i like the movies. I have one brother but he's 20 and i don't really like hollister( although i do have a shirt from there). It's funny i don't really like horse riding for no particular reason, but i love to swim. I play hockey (but unfortunatly they closed the ice rink here) Now i have a question for you( i guess not just one but a few) Do you have an English accent? What is it like in an all girl school? Whats your favorite color? And last but not least, What crogan character do you want to do? personaly I want to do the private eye.

Hi Chippy, This is Maggie's teacher, just trying to get word back to you. She tried to contact you on her home computer and wasn't able to. I am trying to respond to you as a test so I can show others. Thanks for your patience. Judy Graham

About Chippy
Hi I'm, Chippy (not my real name)! Just wanted to say hi! I am 11 years old! I live in Chiswick in London. I'm a Hollister, Twilight, Vampire Diaries and Taylor Lautner fan! By the time your are reading this it is probably midnight in London and I would be fast asleep! I love horse riding and swimming! I have been only been to America twice (Florida, Disney World, and Breknridge,Colorado!)! My favourite thing about school is... hanging out with my friends! I think this project is soooo cool! I don't really know what to write I' m ment to ask you some questions...so...
 * Are you a Twilight fan?
 * Where abouts in Calafornia do you live?
 * Do you have a brother or sister?
 * Do you like Hollister?

Peace out! Lol! :p

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Hey Maggie! I wouldn't really say that I speak in a posh english accent, but I probably don't have an American accent! I...eeeerrrr... really like being at an all girls school, but I don't know what being at a mixed school is like! I don't really have a favourite colour...sorry! I don't really mind what crogan character we do, the private eye sounds cool, i also think that doing the assassin would be fun! But I don't really mind! I'm on my home computer because its the weekend (yay!!!) it's a shame you dont like horse riding or are a big twilight fan! I am twilight and horse CRAZY!!!!! I work at my riding stables on a Sunday (all day!) and have watched twilight and new moon sooooooo many times! It's cool that we both love to swim! What music do you like? When's your birthday? I'll send you some plans for the stories we could do! Including the private eye, the assassin and one more cause that's my homework this weekend! Do you get homework? Anyway, Have a nice weekend and speak to you soon! Chippy =D x x x x x x x

Hey Chippy, I'ts Maggie, I pretty much like rock music or anything really loud. My birthday is December 21, 1997. I think everyone gets homework. I think it's kind of funny how every one thinks that any one that doesn't talk the same as them has an accent, kind of like how I think you have an English accent accent and you think i have and American accent. And I think the assassin would be even cooler then the private eye. Talk to you later, Maggie : )

Hey Maggie, it's Chippy! I like that kinda music too! Pop/Rock! My birthday is in December too, but a bit earlier, and obviously I was born in 1998! Somebody I know doesn't get homework! I agree with what you think about accents! Kinda Funny! Are you ok with doing the assain? Or would you rather do the private eye? I think that the story for the assassin would be good, but I am totally relaxed! I am probably better at writing suspense and killing stories then detective stories! If you had a pen name what would it be? Chippy =D x x x x x x x

Hey Chippy, I think the assassin would be awesome, we should do that. For a pen name........... come to think about it I wouldn't have a pen name because I like my name. I think writing about killing the dutchess of Londen would so crazy and very suspenseful. I think in the end he should decide it would horrible if he kills the dutchess and saves her life but dies while doing it. It would be sad but very interesting. We should add that so that the moral can be somthing like "you can't always put yourself first" or "you should always do the right thing even if it doesn't help you". That would be cool........ In the begining the boys shoud be fighting and ones yelling that he is going to kill his brother and that triggers the dad to talk about the marksman. How do you like my ideas? Talk to you later Maggie ; )

Hey Chippy, I have been triying to research on a marksman, but can't find anything.............. I have an idea for the story so here it is ( it's just a rough thought sooooooo yea here it is) : The boys are running around the house because one stole the other brothers game system or somthing along those lines and hes yelling at him that he will kill him and the dad catchs them and tells them the story of the marksman, and in the story he should start with Geoffrey being mean and really good at dueling and should plot to kill the dutchess or someone important and falls in love on the way (while dueling and killing people to save her) he reach the point to kill the dutchess and he relizes he shoudn't and kills himself so she doesn't die.​​ talk to you later, Maggie; )

Hey Maggie, sorry I haven't replied in ages! We have been rehearsing for our school play! I think your idea sounds really great! I think that instead of the Marksman changing his mind they should fall in love, but at the last minute one of the guards should run in and stab him in the back or something horrific like that! Tell me if you don't like it and we could rethink it! It would kinda be a different version of Romeo and Juliet! I think that our story is going to be really cool whichever idea we go for! I did a sketch of the Marksman in art at school! Didi you do one too? If you want to find out more about our school and some people in my class(including me) look like, check out this site! Type //FSG wiki// into google and click on the result called fsg home! If you click on year six you should find some pictures of the people in my class and what we are doing at school! There is a picture that comes up at the top that is actually a you tube video of everyone in my class! We are all dressed up for our Noir based stories that we wrote! I look really stupid in that photo, but oh well! I will show you where to find a better picture of me later! Chippy =D x x x x x x x

Hey Chippy, I think he should fall in love with the lady and she should be the dutchess but he doesn't know that when he wants to kill her and he finds out right when she is about to die and he jumps in the way of the bomb and saves her life but dies in the process that would be cool. If you want to see a picture of me you can look on facebook and type in my name.

That sounds really cool! Do you know who is doing to do the first draft? I am did some research on him, but can't find anything! Chippy =D x x x x x x x x

Hey Chippy, I love your beginning it's so good. Maggie's Idea:

(this is supposed to be the story the dad is telling but you can change it or add comments if you want too.)

See drafting page.

I don't kow if it is really good, but leave comments.

Hey Maggie! I love your first bit! This story is going to be sooo cool! Peace out! Lol! :p x x x x x x x x x x P.S. My mum is on Facebook, but i'm not! That really was me! Please! If you don't believe me, my teacher is called Mr. Hitchen, he is my English teacher, ask your teacher. He is really strict about outside of the wiki contact! Please accept. I don't think my mom would let me accept, Sorry! I beileive it was you so i'll ask but no promises.

Thanks loads Maggie! You're the BEST! You're probably having lunch right now! Hey Chippy, Sorry I haven't replied in a while i have been really busy on a project for a different class. I had an Idea maybe Geoffery should come from America on a boat............ I don't know.

Don't get you! Sorry!

l don't think it should start in england but he should come from America on a boat to England

I like! My teacher says you're writing the first draft! Okay i'll get right on it Thanks maggie! whos that in the picture? my teacher said to put a picture of your character on your page. That was the only picture I could find! I need help coming up with ideas please help what do you need help with. The plan is up there for you and your first bit was BRILLIANT! Much better then my frame story! How you going? It's not very hard i'm having fun and I think it's so cool talking to someone in another country. And I was wondering which person you are on the video of the detective stories,which person are you like 1st 2nd 3rd 4th...... ect. I just want to know what you look like.... Not sure. I will find a better video of me! I can't write a comment when I ask to be your friend! That I can contact u apart from this page! Yup. Sorry it took so long to reply! I've been on holiday! I really like your beginging, but I think that we should start writing the middle bit and the end! Everyone else is nearly finished! I am so so so so so so sorry I have just finished. And again I am so so so so so sorry. It is our last week of school. That is so cool! Are you moving school? no, school ended we don't go back for three months. Cool! I am changing schools cause by school only goes up to 11! We can still talk through this page if you want to though!

I would totally like to talk through this page

Cool! Soz i took so long 2 reply! I've been in Scotland for 6 weeks!

Thats so cool i've always wanted to go there! School just started back up :p a whole new schedule, and i'm in algebra.