A+drafting

​Evil dude= Yoshiaki Sister= Emiko Girl=Kioko (For "Another Story) mom's friend= Ai

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__**Frame Story**__
"Eric you're in big trouble. why did you spray your teacher's garden purple?" Asked Eric's father David holding seven purple spray cans. Eric was staring at his feet like they were a Piccaso painting. His father and teacher stood in a long dark,dirty, corridor of his teachers hallway.The teacher (Miss F​rogburt) dismissed him and he got into his dad's car. They drove out of the school parking lot in silence. as they approached Cory's karate school the started talking about the incident. "Eric you are in so much trouble" "Dad it wasn't me" "This reminds me of something your great ancestor did, well i'm not sure we have enough time before your brother's karate lesson finishes." They got out of the car and started walking to the park across the street from the karate dojo. "Please dad can it be the private eye or the spy story?" asked Eric eagerly. "Oh alright then,"replied dad. "This story was set a long time ago in Japan. It was the in the seventeen hundreds, and this is the story of the famous martial arts fighter Crogan-Junichi..." They found a nice comfortable bench to sit on, and dad began; Eric began to listen making himself comfortable on the park bench outside his brother's karate dojo.

=__**Story**__=

Yoshiaki left a letter on Crogan-Junichi's nightstand that says "I have your sister and and another girl. They are both trapped in a room with a bomb. One person is to the north and the other is to the south. One has his sister Emiko, but the other location has a girl that Crogan-Junichi doesn't know name Kioko. He doesn't know which location has Emiko and which location has Kioko. The bomb are set for 1 minute 30 seconds. He is exactly 1 minute from each location but both locations are opposite ways from eachother so he only has time to save one. He takes a chance and goes north, he goes inside a dark room, the timer is echoing throughout the room. The girl looks like his sister so he unties her arms and legs but when he goes outside the girl is passed out and isn't Emiko. He falls on his knees, puts the girl down, looks south, and waits for about 30 seconds as he hears and sees the explosion. He's sad and starts to cry, but suddenly, he gets extremely mad and sets out to find Yoshiaki.

i like the firsst one so i am now going to redraft the story!

there was a letter frome someone on Crogan-Junichi's nightstand that says "I have your sister and your lover . They are both trapped in a room with a bomb. One person is trapped at the top of

Ok then i wont finish the other 1 and i cant get anymore inspiration for the reat of the story. Do you want to continue this over the summer???