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Hiya Nicholas, I am VAMPIRE FAN (not my real name) and I //love// Lady Gaga ! My favourite books at the moment are the twilight books by Stephanie Meyer. I live in Chiswick, which is in London, which is in England etc. etc... I have two brothers and a mad soppy puppy called Alfie so I'm not //exactly// a huge //girly girl.// My favourite thing at school is sports because I //love// running around //p.//s: do you mind if I ask some questions?

Vampire Fan's Plan
Characters: Charles Crogan, William Crogan, Private jones and Private Aal

Location: The Atlantic sea, New England and Saint Georges Mansion Beginning: The two brothers (Charles and William) Middle:

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And your sub-plot:

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My questions for Master Smiley
What's your favourite animal? Do you like the Simpsons? What are your hobbies?

So until next time,

PEACE OUT!

Hello Vampire Fan! In my case, Nicholas is my real name and Master Smiley is my pen name... To answer your questions, I think the simpsons are awesome, but the problem is that I have not watched TV in 2 years. My hobbies are, sailing,launching model rockets, flying rc, and reading ginourmous novels like Steven King's under the dome. I have never read twilight though... My favourite animal is a sailfish. I will tell you my ideas for the crogan thingimajiger in a week at terribly most... What is your favorite book other than twilight?

talk to you later, Master Smiley

My Crogan ideas
You know, I really think Master Smiley is a cool pen name. Anyway, I've got some ideas for this Crogan thingymaboby (The William and Charles Crogan one.)

On Friday, we found out that William and Charles Crogan are brothers which is rather cool, so i suppose they could count as one, but the weird thing is that William is an American minuteman and Charles is in the British intfantry, so it could make quite a cool story about them meeting somehow during a war or whatever, anyhoo, here is my frame story.

The frame story
“Eric Crogan, how many times have we been over this? You must not agree to dares! And don’t you give me that rubbish about them thinking that ‘Eric is a dork,’ because you and I both know that he isn’t- is he?!” “No, dad, I suppose he isn’t. It’s just that the other boys in my class said that they would blow raspberries at the teacher too, so I guess it isn’t //entirely// my fault…” Eric’s sentence trailed off as he glanced at his fathers sighing expressin, wondering how much trouble he was in. ‘aint the easiest part of your life being, well, you know, that it’s that point in your life when your growing up and all...” Eric stared at his father with a horrified expression.“Dad! You know very well that I don’t have feelings for Mary Westling- so you can save the lecture on girlfriends ‘till a lot later!”

"Oh, right…I was just thinking-" “NO!” “Sorry, sorry. Anyway, before I heard about your little //incident// earlier on, I was thinking about telling you about the family tree work was doing at around lunch time on your great great great great great great great grandfather’s, William and Charles Crogan. The year? 1776…" //p.s:// sorry, but I told my mum that my pen pal from Califonia has​n't watched TV in two years, and boy she was shocked. So she now wants to know //is it because you dont want to watch TV, or because u 'aint aloud?// sorry again about the annoying question! Goodbye and goodnight, although u are probably just in school by now...

__ The frame story is great!!!! We should really do that! I have not watched TV in 2 yrs because, this is going to be a shock to you, I lived on a 55ft Tayana55 sailing yacht. There, I said it. AWSOME!!  You can see almost a 5th of my life on this blog: [|www.SamadhiV.org]. Hismiley, I looked at your blog + your youtube channel which is cool. master I think that we are off to a good start with that article.. -Master Smiley  P.S:I am going to be responding to any reply usually at about this time: 12:50.. P.S.S. How do you make the lines that are in the table of contents? you write what you want to write but highlight it and click on the thing saying NORMAL in the tools bar, and click on "heading three P.S.S.S. What are your favorite hobbies? P.S.S.S.S. I like making P.S. thingymajigers... P.S.S.S.S.S. ; )​ P.S.S.S.S.S.S. I will be gone until next monday on science camp... There will be no pcs so stay put and maybe try to improve the frame story... I leave next morning, talk to ya later, Master Smiley__

I am back!!! Science camp was awesome, we hiked, shot zombies with arrows, and then played frisbee for 4 days!!!!! WE NEED THE FRAME STORY NOW!!! I AM SOOO BEHIND, EVERYBODY ELSE IS ALMOST DONE! Here is my idea...

So Charles and William Crogan are at opposite ends of the battlefield in their own tents. Then William hears an alarm and everybody is out and running, while Charles is in the forest marching towards William's camp. Many people next to him are shot, but he is brave and follows the rules of war and keeps marching without hesitating. William's camp needs to fall back because they do not have enough manpower when William has an idea... William has an idea to not follow the british rules of noble warfare. Why? It doesn't take much to watch who gets shot the easiest. Red coats, marching lines of soldiers who get picked off like ducks. We have so little ammunition, so why not wait until they reach us, but be hidden, so they don't shoot us first. We could hide behind or even in trees and pick the british off one by one. All of a sudden, I see that my partner has been shot, and I know that the British have discovered us. Meanwhile Charles finally sees a person aiming his musket at him. He knows that he is breaking the rules of fair and noble war when he runs behind a tree. This tree covers him from a musket ball, but he heard the pellet fall to the ground. When he sees it on the ground he thinks, "Hummm, homemade, the so-called colonials are running out of supplies. That's good..." He hears a volley of muskets go off and many people screaming as they are shot. He hears cries of pain from soldiers as though a shower of lightning bolts had hit them. He hates war, but the only way to stop it is to fight it and win. He moves quickley to a bigger and wider tree. While he is running, he only notes the bashing of his heart. Once hidden again, he waits until the shots have stopped firing. He peers out and notices that all of his troops are dead. There is a single American bending over a fallen British officer, confiscating his gun, ammo, and powder. Charles is takes aim when the American hesitates, lifts his head as though he heard something. and then turns towards him. He stands up and starts to walk towards the tree where Charles is hidden. "Charles! Charles!". It was his brother, William Crogan. He drops his musket and stares in amazement. "I thought you were dead!!!"

And then I thought that you could add on some of your ideas and we can keep adding on our own ideas to cooperate to the frame story until we have a good story started..Sound good!?!?

-Master Smiley PS Please always respond as much as you can and as much as you can, we do not have much time left...

OMG I KNOW!!! my mums laptop aint workin!! i am using a school computer so HOORAY! loads of people are almost finished over here in london so i like ur idea and lets go with it (AAAAAAAHHHH!!!!) GOODBYE!!! P.S: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! P.SS: how the heck did u shoot a zombie ( do they even exist? )

Hey Vampire Fan, This is the last week of school so I am logging out forever, bye!

Goodbye Nicholas, I suppose you will never read this but I have enjoyed working with you, so, well, BYEEEEE!!