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John Tolliver Crogan Pilot media type="custom" key="5987319"picture by estoril This page is for planning and discussion; Fashionhawk and Michael are drafting their story here.

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Michael Speech
Hey I think I've figured out this thing... Go to the discussions link, then post something... -Michael <^ ~ ^>(it's a pussycat)

About Fashionhawk
Hey I'm Fashionhawk! Ok, well you probably realize that I am a ' FASHIONHOLIC ' and a real girly girl. When I'm older ( I'm 11 now) I want to be a succesful fashion designer. I have a brother and a sister (and soon a gorgeous cocker spaniel puppy)! I am a HUGE fan of 'Twilight' and 'The Vampire Diaries' (oh) and 'Starstrukk' by 30!3 feat Katy Perry. I'm half english and half belguin (I'm moving there in two months when I get my puppy!) I live in Chiswick, London and I adore drama, singing (music) and dance. I am truly TERRIFIED of spiders! So... 1) What is your favourite song? 2) What do you want to be when you're older? 3) What are your talents?

-Fashionhawk *_* (it's a puppy)

About Michael
Well that sounds like an exciting job!!! Hope you can pull it off! I'm also a fan of Twilight, and i think i should take a gander at the Vampire Diaries'. I like that one song "Fireflies" by Owl City, it's so awkward and clever. Ummm, when I'm older i hope to be a Marine Biologist, and if that doesn't work out I would like to try being a therapist. I don't really know about my talents yet... but I know i enjoy texting, music, and reading. I love animals and I like being with animals especially dogs. I am so excited about working with you and I can't wait to hear more from you Fashion Hawk!!! -Michael : D

Fashionhawk's ideas for Crogan stories
B.T.W. I also love 'Fireflies'

Here are three Crogan story plans going in 'My Favourite to 'My Third Favourite'.

1) John Tolliver Crogan - 1st World War Pilot

Location: Atlantic sea Characters: John Tolliver Crogan

1) Plane crashes in water - John gets out alive! 2) Swims to ilsand nearby 3) Boat comes near - German boat! 4) He takes of all clothes with any sign surporting the British and makes a good German accent 5) German allow him on boat - he's safe!

2) Joseph Crogan - Diamond Miner

Location: Mexico Characters: William, Robert, Max, Bill (friends - miners) and Joseph Crogan

1) Huge desert sandstorm near mining grounds- all friends and colleges dissapear 2) Joseph is left alone 3) Survives a few days by himself and then goes back to the mining grounds 4) Suspense - Joseph hears weird sounds 5) Finds friends at bottom of mine - helps them out!

3) William and Charles Crogan (I've mixed two characters togther)

Location: America and the Atlantic sea Characters: William Crogan, Charles Crogan, Sir Theodore Stenpherd, maid Those ideas​ seem awesome!!! I really like John Tolliver Crogan's story, maybe he can fall in love with the maid or a female soldier! He could also get found out from the German and tries to escape with the love interest.

Michael reply and ideas
K. Alexander Crogan 1) It could start when the boys get caught trying to get the answers of a big math test from their teachers desk... and then their father would go on about living the life of a secret agent/spie. 2) Could be spying on enemies from a distance... or he could be impersonating the enemy to get some secret battle strategies up close. 3) Could get caught and locked in a jail cell. 4) Uses wits to trick guard and break out. Happy Ending!!!

Tell me what you think about my ideas. Thanks!!!

Fashionhawk reply
Brill. That's a good idea for a story. Love the female soldier idea. They could run back to England together. We'll do the pilot since we have so many ideas about it, right? Peace out, Fashionhawk

Michael Reply and Ideas
Great! I will try as best as i can to think of ideas. Maybe we should set up a time where we can talk instantly. I think that the we should add an intense air battle also. I can already tell that this is going to be an exciting story : ). We could name the love interest Abigail, Aurora or maybe Sarah. Maybe as an epilogue we could add a picture of John Tolliver Crogan and the love interest holding a baby, K. Alexander Crogan. We could also add many characters, like a best friend... we could name him Thomas Simmons, and an enemy named Axel. They could have an intense fight scene where Axel jumps aboard the plane from his plane and tries to murder John and Aurora/Abigail/Sarah/Annemarie and they start fighting and then they end up on the top of the plane and John shakes him off by kicking him off the plane or something.

Fashionhawk Reply
Wow! Sounds like you've really got a lot of ideas and you're loving it as much as I am! By the way, I couldn't have internet for a week so I couldn't write back. So sorry to keep you waiting!!! Remember we're aiming for aprox. one and a half to two pages so have have to keep a simple plan. I love you're ideas. Shall we call the girl Anne? Anyway, I've put my simple, starting plan and things on the other page and you can add your thoughts on. Fashionhawk


 * Michael Reply **

Great! We can finally get started on this project!!! I've been so excited this past week, I better get busy with this now... talk to you later!!! :) It's going real nice, could you tell me what you think please??? I also want to know if you could pitch me some more good ideas please. Oh, and my computer glitched and cut off some of your plan of the story, could you fix it pleasey please???Well see you l8tr!!! This is also my last week of school so I think I might not be able to finish the story.